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Monday, 29 April 2019

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Adverbs to start sentences with:
>Quickly, Significantly, Cautiously, Firstly, Remarkably, Similarly, Importantly, Readily, Surprisingly, Curiously, Concerningly, Interestingly, Shakingly, Continuously, Consecuenly.
 
e.g
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Quickly, I ran to see the fireworks

Sadly, It was too late to see the fireworks

Happily, he catches the dog from top of the tree


Begin with a preposition:
Preposition are little indicating movement or position.
 
e.g- In, against, before, between, over, behind, within, under, below, at, for, throughout, near, about.
 Throughout this lesson, students have been working
quietly.

Against all odds, the army was defeated by a single
man.
- Under the dark water sea level, there was a giant unknown creature swimming around it.

- Within 4 minutes, the giant unknown creature i'm talking about was just a submarine that showed up above the water.

PEEL
P = Point - state the point you want to make.
e.g Martha is bullied at school.
Throughout the novel 'Abomination', Martha is bullied at school.

E = Evidence - support your point with 2-3 sentences. 
e.g - An example of this is the incident with the girls throwing water over the toilet stall onto Martha. When she come out of the stall they punched her in the stomach and called her a slut. This made Martha feel angry and upset.

E = Explain - Link my evidence to my point
                     - 2 sentences.
E.g  Unsurprisingly, this is an example of physical bullying by students towards Martha. 
That was an imbalance of power between Martha and her bullies because there was one of her and three of them.

L = Link - link back to your argument 
                - link to the next paragraph
Another way Martha experiences suffering is at the hearts of her parents and the church of the Righteous.

Friday, 12 April 2019

Sentence Card

The Very Short Sentence -
The dog barks to me.

Start with a Preposition -
At the building, there was a accident happened.

The W-Start - 
Without the oxygen tank, you can't breath under water.

Explore the Subject Sentence - 
Dr. Edmond, who was a scientist and working about Biology

The Power Sentence - 
You can think that animals are sometimes smarter than humans.

The Red, White, and Blue Sentence - 
The girl mixed apples, grapes, and orange to make a juice.

The Ed-Start - 
Angered by the car traffic, he was late because of the traffic.

The Simple Sentence -
He jumped down from waterfall to amaze his friends.

The -ing Start -
Thinking a plan to get to the highest of the tree

The Em-Dash Sentence -
Edmond - a scientist that amazed other scientist with his experiment - created a new experiment with amazing particles like fire works.

The Semi-colon Sentence -
I know a man that can breath underwater for too long; I can't even imagine if I can beat his best time breathing underwater.

The Adverb Start -
Quickly, the phone was nearly going to crack to the ground if he didn't catch it the on right time.


Tuesday, 2 April 2019

What we did in this experiment is we separate the liquid form the solid.

 What happened to our experiment is that there's 3 different types of coke, one is the normal coke with sugar, two is the diet coke, and three is the no sugar coke zero. My group picked the zero one.

What happened to the normal coke, first the water from coke is boiling and it evaporates through the conical flask and it goes through the delivery tubes and flows to the tube, the water vapour is gather in a boiling tube and condenses it back to liquid and the coke from the conical flask left a liquid sugar.

 I'm pretty sure that's what happened to our experiment because the normal coke is the only one that leaves a sugar from the conical flask and the other cokes only leaves a liquid from the conical flask.

 All those happened because of the Bunsen burner boiling the coke under it and while the coke is boiling, it evaporates the water from the coke and goes in the tube, and when the water from coke is gone, the coke leaves a sugar left behind.

 Our experiments were successful because all of our coke experiments happened the same time but not the same thing happened because all of us picked one of the types of coke and my group picked the zero one, maybe next time I'll mix the two cokes and see what's happens.