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Adverbs to start sentences with:

>Quickly, Significantly, Cautiously, Firstly, Remarkably, Similarly, Importantly, Readily, Surprisingly, Curiously, Concerningly, Interestingly, Shakingly, Continuously, Consecuenly.

 

e.g

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Quickly, I ran to see the fireworks

Sadly, It was too late to see the fireworks

Happily, he catches the dog from top of the tree

Begin with a preposition:

Preposition are little indicating movement or position.

 

e.g- In, against, before, between, over, behind, within, under, below, at, for, throughout, near, about.

 Throughout this lesson, students have been working

quietly.

Against all odds, the army was defeated by a single

man.

- Under the dark water sea level, there was a giant unknown creature swimming around it.

- Within 4 minutes, the giant unknown creature i'm talking about was just a submarine that showed up above the water.

PEEL

P = Point - state the point you want to make.

e.g Martha is bullied at school.

Throughout the novel 'Abomination', Martha is bullied at school.

E = Evidence - support your point with 2-3 sentences. 

e.g - An example of this is the incident with the girls throwing water over the toilet stall onto Martha. When she come out of the stall they punched her in the stomach and called her a slut. This made Martha feel angry and upset.

E = Explain - Link my evidence to my point

                     - 2 sentences.

E.g  Unsurprisingly, this is an example of physical bullying by students towards Martha. 

That was an imbalance of power between Martha and her bullies because there was one of her and three of them.

L = Link - link back to your argument 

                - link to the next paragraph

Another way Martha experiences suffering is at the hearts of her parents and the church of the Righteous.